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SMB/Kirby_Little Pink Pest by Chivi-chivik

As a first for a water color, this isn't half bad. ^^ The Kirby's eyes in the middle of the stacked ones are a little lopsided; not sur...

Citizen Kane Painting [5/5] by Blu3Danny

This gives me vibes of the lonely kind; what with the sled being what I assume abandoned in the blizzard, hence the reason why the Impa...

Citizen Kane Painting [4/5] by Blu3Danny

Ahhh, now this is considerable improvement. I like how the boy is looking solemnly/curiously at something at a distance like he's conte...

Citizen Kane Painting [3/5] by Blu3Danny

This is actually a decent grayscale painting as it depicts what I can only assume a scene from a black and white movie and you're tryin...

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And probably for good...poor baby's been with me for 7 long years.

Tried System Restore, messed it up and none of my browsers would open.  Can't even defrag the hard drive at this point...

Because of this, all reviews and my art will be put on hold until further notice.
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Fanfiction Gold! #1

Journal Entry: Wed Oct 22, 2014, 8:38 PM
As most of you are aware, your Pumpkin Queen has been reviewing fanfiction that will hopefully help her with her own writing skills.  Amongst the ones that I've been reviewing thus far, these fanfics have stood out from the rest and so here is my newest Fanfiction Feature Segment:  Fanfiction Gold!

These fanfictions overall have an amazing plot, descriptive scenes and outstanding imagery, as well as very little grammar errors.  In no particular order, I shall feature a fanfiction (and their OCs), include the author's fanfiction summary (if any), and then explain why it is one of the best.

(I also wanted to get this done before my Premium ran out; I wanted the features to all have a special Journal skin.)



AOnceToldStory 
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Fireborn


Fandom:  Lord of the Rings/The Hobbit

Fireborn (Hobbit) ~ Prologue by AOnceToldStory

Author's Summary


A mysterious caravan pulls into the
Blue Mountains, wrecking havoc. As
they leave, dozens of Dwarves go
missing — including Kíli.

Along with the young blacksmith Elir,
Fíli sets out to find and rescue his
brother before it’s too late. Not far
behind is Thorin, desperate to bring
his nephews back home safely.

But there’s more to the kidnappings
than anyone could have foreseen, and
a plan to rid the Blue Mountains of
Dwarves forever is brewing in the
darkness…


Before-Canon stories are always some of my favorite stories to read, and this is one of them.  These are before the events of The Hobbit, before the dwarves met Bilbo Baggins.  What I particularly liked about this story was that you can actually feel the struggle and the emotions that are going on through each of the characters, so by the time Kili goes missing after meeting with some humans, Thorin and the others have an incentive.  This story very well explains and delves into why Thorin dislikes humans and tries to convince his nephew that he must stay away from them at all costs.  


 
romancefreak 
:iconromancefreak:

To Love a Criminal


Fandom:  Great Mouse Detective


OC:  Cimarron Starbright


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Takes place after the events of the Great Mouse Detective and Professor Ratigan is dead, or is he?  Good gosh, the imagery in this story is just astounding, especially if you all were to read past the first chapter.  All of the chapters' scenes are incredibly detailed and you can literally see what is going on.  I've only seen this movie once, and I already know how Ratigan is like just by reading this fanfiction alone.  This is fantastic~  If fanfiction can do that, you can tell that it's worth reading.



Toa-Andrew 
:icontoa-andrew:

Bionicle - Legend of Earth


Fandom:  Bionicle





What I particular liked about this story was that the 2 main characters (the OCs), who are turned from humans to Toa Guardians, still have their human side and hasn't forgotten about who they were before the transformation.  Later in the story, you are directed back to Earth, where you see what is going on with the 2 main characters gone.  Everything is amok to the point that the police are called.  That in itself is one of the best aspects of the story; not forgetting who you are and how your absence affects others.




:star: Congratulations, everyone~! :star:



  • Mood: Amazed
And probably for good...poor baby's been with me for 7 long years.

Tried System Restore, messed it up and none of my browsers would open.  Can't even defrag the hard drive at this point...

Because of this, all reviews and my art will be put on hold until further notice.
  • Mood: Irritated

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:bulletred:These are fanfiction stories that I will not review simply because they are of the following (these are subject to change as I get more experienced with critiquing literature pieces):

:bulletred: Reader x Whatshis/hername
:bulletred: Crackfics
:bulletred: Lemons
:bulletred: Heavy Slash (graphic sex scenes and things of that nature)
:bulletred: Celebrity Fanfiction
:bulletred: RP Based Fanfiction
:bulletred: CreepyPasta

:bulletorange:I will also not review fanfiction because the author fails or does the following things:

:bulletorange: Multi-chaptered stories in one piece; to further explain, finishing a chapter and then continuing with the other chapters on the same page. It's sloppy.
:bulletorange: Not mention the name of the fandom unless it's painfully obvious

:bulletgreen:These are fanfics I would review:

:bulletgreen: Stuff that I'm familiar/unfamiliar with.
:bulletgreen: Fanfics with hardly any constructive criticism from the commentators.
:bulletgreen: Any fanfic that is multi-chaptered and is properly linked to the next/previous chapter. (This is subject to change as well.)
:bulletgreen: Slight Slash (I can put up with kisses; this could also be subtle)
:bulletgreen: Fanfics in First POV
:bulletgreen: Oneshots

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:iconminoritygirl:
Minoritygirl Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
OH MY GOD I never got you anything for your birthday...... I AM SO SORRY!! God I feel like one of those people who promise you something and ends up just being mean. 
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PumpkinQueen13 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Student General Artist
It's all right. I did say that you didn't have to give me anything. ^^
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Minoritygirl Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
I WILL DRAW YOU CLOUD! From final fantasy...
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PumpkinQueen13 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Student General Artist
That's fine.  ^^
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SavageFrog Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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PumpkinQueen13 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Student General Artist
OAO Thank you, Froggy~ :huggle:

DO ALL THE MEMES!!! :iconallthethingsplz:
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SavageFrog Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome & go for it. XD
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PumpkinQueen13 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Student General Artist
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faolruadh Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014
Thanks for the faves.
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PumpkinQueen13 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Student General Artist
You're welcome~
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